Cheesy Shoot That Fell To Bits

I had a great model and a good idea but I honestly feel my dedication to this brief lacked and my final images showed this. I did however love the destruction of the cheese under the studio lights and the way it contrasts with the red back ground. However I feel some shots look as if they are suited for a McDonalds porno.

The bottom half of the dress is clearly better as the cheese slices are overlapping each other. All I have to do now is write about how I have failed. I wish it could of gone so much better...